Poetry By Kids
Bibliography
Adedjouma, Davida. 1996. THE PALM OF MY HEART: POETRY BY
AFRICAN AMERICAN CHILDREN. Ill. by Gregory Christie. New York: Lee & Low
Books. ISBN 1880000415
Summary
African American children whose ages range from eight to
fourteen years old compose The Palm of my
Heart, an anthology of twenty poems. The poems express their beliefs,
determination, pride, and strength of family. The poems are the work of
children involved in a writing workshop presented by the editor of The Palm of my Heart, Davida Adedjouma,
in conjunction with the Minnesota Inner City Youth League, and the
African-American Academy for Accelerated Learning.
Quality and Appeal
The Palm of my Heart begins
with an editor’s note to explain the beginnings of the idea for the book, how
the book was published, and hopefully, instill a desire in African American children
to explore and seek out the uniqueness of their identity. An introduction comes
next from renowned poet, Lucille Clifton. In this introduction, Ms. Clifton
reflects back on her experiences with the word ”Black” and offers praise to the
young poets in the book for their uplifting and positive words in regard to the
same word. Twenty poems by twenty individuals follow the
introduction. Each poem composed begins with the same word, “Black.” When using
the word black, each poet’s thoughts are expressed in a positive manner and
with pride. Topics consist of culture, race, skin color, imagination, power, ancestry,
and spirit. Throughout the book, the word black is bolded as is the topic
associated with the word. Each author is given credit for their poetry with
their name boxed in various colors underneath the poems. At the conclusion of
the book is a section titled, “About the Poets,” which gives the name of each
poet, birthdates, interests, and what they dream of becoming when they get
older.
Illustrator Gregory Christie won the Coretta Scott King
honor award for The Palm of my Heart. His
work for the book was rendered in acrylic and colored pencil. The images
portrayed in the book are vivid and culturally authentic. One image is
particularly poignant with its connection to African American’s heritage. The
image portrayed in “Black Poetry” shows small children surrounding two older
gentlemen, who look to be playing drums strapped around their shoulders. Images
of thatched roofed huts are seen in the background. The words from the poem, “a
dance in the sand, a song from a faraway land” lead the reader to believe that
this could be Africa.
Most poems are written in free verse with two poems written
in rhyme. This rhyme facilitates the rhythm that flows with each reading.
Repetition is evident in each poem with the word “black” used as the basis for
each poem’s construction. Repetition can also be heard with the lines, “Life is
good / life is good.” and “black is me.”
Sound, in the form of onomatopoeia, is demonstrated in the
poem created by Ratisha Hawkins. She describes black hands as beautiful as
“They wiggle, wwwhhh, in the wind.”
Other elements of poetry include the use of simile when Tyler says, “Black is
as dark as me,” when Ratisha compares how her hands wiggle “like the wind,” and
the description of how “Black is beautiful as beautiful as white people /
beautiful / as April.” Metaphor examples
include “Black culture is a secret / shared in the night,” “Black power is
freedom, the strength to live / live / long,” and lastly, “Black spirit turns
and churns / it is energetic and eternal.” Personification is used with the
words, “ Black imagination: / letters printed in a book / sitting there.” Each
poem resonates a pride and celebration of the human spirit within each child.
The Palm of my Heart will
elicit a cultural pride from every African American child that desires to read
or hear this book read to them. One cannot help but feel a wide range of
emotions when reading this anthology. The depth to which these children
expressed themselves should speak to each person that comes in contact with
this book of poems. We should never limit our potential and the ability to
address topics so close to our heart. This stands true for all races, creed,
colors, genders, nationalities, and religion.
Spotlight Poem
Black is the
color of some people
but people are different
differences are good
because
no one else says the
same things as you.
SHAWNTA’YA JONES
Connections:
The teacher should introduce the book by informing students
that the authors of each poem are children their own age and that each poem
begins with the same word. The teacher should inform students that the poems
are a celebration of each poet’s life and how that celebration revolves around
their cultural heritage. The teacher should read the book and highlight the
poem above.
This poem lends itself to an honest conversation about
diversity within the classroom. The teacher and students should discuss how
their classroom is rich in cultural diversity. Students can discuss and chart
what makes each culture represented within the classroom unique. After charting
these differences the students can create a classroom poem celebrating the
backgrounds of each child.

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